| Author | Post |
|---|
Will Kemp
Member
| Joined: | Thu Feb 14th, 2008 |
| Location: | Kentucky USA |
| Posts: | 76 |
| Status: |
Offline
|
| Mana: |   |
|
Posted: Mon Apr 28th, 2008 05:00 pm |
|
Time: The bleeding edge of the Trojan war. . .
Isn't that a great line to open a play with?
I am reading Corey Allen's play Clytemnaestra, and people, it is getting good. ..suspenseful, great images, interesting characters. ..some high theatricality...a hooded character sneaks in with the dogs after him. Aegisthus!!!
I don't know if Corey has the whole play on this website yet, but he has part of it on here. Check it out sometime.
|
in media res
Member
|
Posted: Tue Apr 29th, 2008 02:04 pm |
|
Will,
I highly agree.
i have followed corerro's building of his epic play and am very impressed.
Again, I would also recommend reading Edward Crosby Wells' play "The Moon Away" which he has posted at his website edwardcrosbywells.com.
Previous remarks from others on this site can be found in a previous post on this thread with the link below:
http://www.stageplays-forum.com/forum24/2109.html
best,
in media res
|
Will Kemp
Member
| Joined: | Thu Feb 14th, 2008 |
| Location: | Kentucky USA |
| Posts: | 76 |
| Status: |
Offline
|
| Mana: | |
|
Posted: Wed Apr 30th, 2008 01:11 am |
|
Okay, I will check out this other play.
Corey, I think, must be young. I think thaty he iis still in college even. . .he has a college address, I noticed. If he is that good now, he will be great later. I told him the only thing that I really saw wrong with his dialogue was it was a bit wordy and he used a few too many cliches. You know: He would use a cliche one minute and then have a great image in the next line! Makes no sense.
I am calling Corey "Gory Corey" now because his play is as bloody as Titus Andronicus (: )
|
Current time is 08:36 am | |
|
