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timmy
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Posted: Wed Feb 20th, 2008 10:44 pm |
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this man and an empty room, cracked
heart in hands
his weary arms, no place
to set it down
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kris
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Posted: Thu Feb 21st, 2008 07:55 pm |
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This poem made me chuckle in a dry way, and reminded me of how much I used to enjoy Stephen Crane's "lines."
kris
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in media res
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Posted: Fri Feb 22nd, 2008 11:42 pm |
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timmy, must be a great poem, because unlike kris, I got a tear in my eye.
two different reactions!
terrific piece.
in media res
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lostsocks
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Posted: Sat Feb 23rd, 2008 03:18 pm |
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This really effected me, especially in it's simplicity.
Thank you Timmy
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timmy
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Posted: Sat Feb 23rd, 2008 08:23 pm |
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Thank you
x 3
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