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HJordan
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 Posted: Fri Mar 28th, 2008 02:24 pm
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Love for his wife steadfast and pure
Committed to family but he yearns to know
He never before met a girl such as her
Would she be his, if what is wasn’t so?

He can’t ignore them, his feelings are true
Longing not felt since courting his wife
Completely one sided or alive in her too?
No way to know, his source of great strife.

With hope he anticipates each interaction
Heartbroken, never to know her embrace
Would she confirm she feels this attraction?
Words, once spoken, cannot be erased

Jealousy hidden when others admire
Wishing to feel the touch of her hand
Secretly hoping she feels his desire
Fixation, Frustration, Temptation withstand

            He might put to rest, this desire of his
            To just know what if, without changing what is

Last edited on Fri Mar 28th, 2008 02:26 pm by HJordan

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 Posted: Fri Mar 28th, 2008 02:29 pm
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I'm anxious to hear anyone's thoughts/critiques and to know how the poem is interpreted.  Did I get my feelings across?  What do you believe the poem is about?


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