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Posted: Sun Nov 27th, 2011 03:12 am

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timmy
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How valuable these
shortened days are
becoming

less time threading through
leaf empty branches

the coming cold tells such
a different story

The way we stand there
next to darkened windows

our fingers reaching
to gather what we can

to offer to each other later,
in more darkness, one body
next to another

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