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 Posted: Sat Jun 28th, 2008 03:41 pm
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Celsun

 

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Just like the commentors, I agree that it seems like the start of something good. It has a beginning, middle and end, a classic structure, but the middle is over as soon as it begins (of course, because of the two-page restriction). I haven't read many two-minute plays, but I imagine that the endings aren't so conclusive. That's why I think this shouldn't be a two-minute play at all.
   It seems almost natural to keep them in the elevator for a longer period of time, raise the tension.

Good work.