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 Posted: Thu Jan 22nd, 2009 02:16 am
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MontyD

 

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Mana: 
Thanks for the additional input. I think my first draft (above) fell into the "repeat" trap ("What? You want me to come and see you?") which is the easy but not so interesting way to communicate the second side of a conversation. I've rewritten and they look better. Hearing something in my head doesn't mean repeating it hehe. Thanks again people.