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Hi, I think I will have to agree with Muncy. The end was not a surprising/witty.
Possible ending: Can we at least do the point five?
I think that Harold pays attention to his wife too quickly. He should be a bit more distracted.
I don’t know about you but my wife always seems to pick the crucial moments in a TV program to engage in conversation/nagging, like when the lion is just about to pounce on its prey, or when the guy with the nun chucks is just about to go on stage on America’s got Talent!
Further along, if Harold is trying to please his wife by saying yesterday? Is he trying to change the subject so that he can carry on watching TV? So he can go to sleep? His statement “Yesterday” seemed to be a bit abrupt/out of the blue, or did he say it off handedly?
Katherine
What did you say?
Harold (realising his mistake)
Nothing
Katherine
Yes Harold I am being emotional. Pardon me for caring about our marriage. Pardon me for wanting a normal sex life. Pardon me for being upset that you think I’m an ugly cow.
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Katherine
No, Harold you don’t. The blood the cramping the pain it would kill you.
Harold (False bravado)
Huh, now you are being ridiculous.
Has this helped?
Trev N