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 Posted: Thu May 6th, 2010 12:41 am
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Darkja



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Mana: 
 although I appreciate the suggestions. (I agree with you the end is a bit mundane) I would appreciate it more if they were suggestions without actually re-working lines of dialogue. I also do want to point out that the ending was not necessarily meant to be a surprise, or witty but rather identifiable.