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 Posted: Tue Dec 14th, 2010 12:16 pm
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Darkja



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Mana: 
Wow very interesting and powerful. My only criticism would be that there is a lot of description in the stage directions that may not read. For example when they describe that he always get home after sunset that is hard to get across non-verbally. I'm not suggesting narration or anything just keep the stage directions to what can be portrayed.

Darkja