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 Posted: Sat Dec 15th, 2007 03:07 am
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Paddy



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Shirley.

Remembered to delete your extra posts, but forgot to comment.  I really love this idea.  The dialgue flows.  The situation is really fun.

I think the revealing of their past could be a little more conversational.

I also think I'd like them stuck a little longer.

I think this is a wonderful start to something.

Really nicely done.

Paddy