The Logic of Waves - Critique my Poem - The Art & Craft of Writing

STAGEPLAYS BOOKSHOP

THEATRE-CONNECT

PUBLISH MY PLAY

AFFILIATE PROGRAM

THEATRE BANNER EXCHANGE

The Playwrights Forum > The Art & Craft of Writing > Critique my Poem > The Logic of Waves

Moderated by: Paddy, Edd

New Topic

Printer Friendly

The Logic of Waves

Rate Topic

Author	Post

Posted: Fri Aug 19th, 2011 03:34 pm

Quote

1^st Post

timmy
Member

Joined:	Fri Jun 9th, 2006
Location:	Oz, Minnesota USA
Posts:	926
Status:	Offline
Mana:

The mist of the lake
so much like the press
of your skin on mine

a tender lie
of captured light,
lyrics unashamed

tiny waves of skin:
seven, eight, nine

dusk and mist
blend into
a private poem

everything eventually
settles in opal water

When the heart pulses,
reasons sway

Quote

Current time is 09:54 am
The Playwrights Forum > The Art & Craft of Writing > Critique my Poem > The Logic of Waves	Top