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 Posted: Sat Apr 4th, 2015 02:33 am
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Mana: 
The only way to get away with murder is when revenge is the motive. It’s the only true emotion that allows us to contemplate how not to get caught. In order to feel revenge one must feel loss, it’s during that period of loss a moment of genius is revealed. In a quiet comfortable home tragedy befalls, and a Mother not wanting to forgive or forget has her period of genius which is fueled to set wrongs right.

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Mana: 
I don't accept the premise. Lots of people get away with murder.

I'd check your punctuation to make things clearer. I am sort of intrigued, but it is not clear.

Yeeeeahh...I knooooooooooow......."they" teach you to make the "logline" in one or two sentences.

But that is BS. Nothing is better than clarity.

Again, check your punctuation to help make it clearer.

At least that is my suggestion.

Best,

IMR

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