On the Bright Side, I found a link to a Theatre review from the Vancouver production and read that. It was an Audience Favorite! Sounds quite uniquely wonderful. Why do you not have THE REVIEW link on the Amazon site? It will only help you.
HOWEVER: May I highly suggest you check your punctuation, as your Amazon post is a confusing read.
If you were not a member of the Forum, I would not have finished it.
Remember, this is the first time someone will be reading about your play. Why make it an effort? Don't give them a Bumpy Ride. It is sort of like showing up on a First Date with a dirty, wrinkled shirt and food caught between your teeth.