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 Posted: Tue Jan 12th, 2021 11:40 pm
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Potabasil
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 She was down there
three to four days
a week they whispered.

Carrying her empties
to the bottle bank

Her walk of shame

Gathering at the
corner shop
as she passed
with her bags
full of empty bottles
locals were quick to notice
the cut of her.

Has she no shame?

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