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 Posted: Sat Dec 18th, 2021 06:22 am
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 A twig of mistletoe hung low
over the Liffey
on the cast-iron bridge
they stopped awhile

Green leaves
full of white berries
he would pick one and get a kiss
she would pick one and get another

On their way to the
twelve pubs of Christmas
warm jumpers and mittens
taking a selfie with a stranger
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 Posted: Sat Dec 18th, 2021 06:26 pm
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 Oh, Potabasil! This is absolutely wonderful. Joy, warmth and nostalgia all at once and tied with a pretty ribbon. Thank you.
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 Posted: Sat Dec 18th, 2021 07:52 pm
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 Wow thank you, Edd
Happy you like it
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