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This is a 10-minute comedy. Comments appreciated.
For a clean version in txt. format, go to the link at the bottom. I had it posted, but ... Fri Jun 8th, 2007 10:51 am Critique my Play > A Fictional Life -- A Memoir by Anonymous (3 replies - 998 views)
Archivist -- I just reposed my "memoir" taking your comments into consideration. If you've got the time and inclination, I'd appreciate your comments on whether you ... Sat Jun 2nd, 2007 09:16 pm Critique my Play > A Fictional Life -- A Memoir by Anonymous (3 replies - 998 views)
Thanks for your comments. Very helpful.
Actually, the arc is coping with a recovering memory of being a writer, leading up to his discovery (next installment) on ... Sat Jun 2nd, 2007 05:27 pm Critique my Play > A Fictional Life -- A Memoir by Anonymous (3 replies - 998 views)
Revised following first comment. I'm not sure if this better (i.e., pulling out the dialogue and read off stage and piped through speaker system). On the up ... Fri Jun 1st, 2007 08:52 pm Critique my Play > The Ashes of Frank Delaney (4 replies - 851 views)
"An Inconvenient Wind" -- now there's a title for a short play. We can all guess the premise. ... Tue May 22nd, 2007 04:30 am Critique my Play > Estate Sale (6 replies - 892 views)
I was hoping everyone would get the final beat that Gladys, despite being bloody and in extremis, uses her vast knowledge to warn off others. A good director ... Mon May 21st, 2007 05:39 pm Critique my Play > The Ashes of Frank Delaney (4 replies - 851 views)
Thanks for responding. The earthquake is introduced to set up the Ranger's later reveal that they're on the wrong mountain, and also serves to hurry up ... Mon May 21st, 2007 07:13 am Critique my Play > Estate Sale (6 replies - 892 views)
Thanks for the post. I thought about having everyone there at the beginning, but there is a staging concern -- if a character is onstage, ... Sun May 20th, 2007 10:10 pm |