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Critique my Play > I see a rabbit (4 replies - 7975 views)

I liked some of the wit but it seems like the answer to a playwrting competition being a play about generating ideas for a playwriting ...   Wed May 15th, 2013 02:02 pm

Critique my Play > Judas' Kiss (if you are offended by religious themes don't read) (1 reply - 5717 views)

I love that so many people have read my piece. Do you love it? Hate It/ I would love to hear from you. (no re-writes ...   Mon Jul 30th, 2012 08:44 pm

Critique my Play > Judas' Kiss (if you are offended by religious themes don't read) (1 reply - 5717 views)

Dear Friends,           I have been absent from the forum for a bit. In my adsence I have begun working on some scripts for a religous ...   Wed May 16th, 2012 06:54 pm

Work-in-Progress > Another "Just Do It" piece (2 replies - 9448 views)

It was very well received better than I could have hoped. I have another one called "Substitution" being performed on the 3rd and my full ...   Fri May 27th, 2011 04:14 pm

Critique my Play > one minute play (8 replies - 11470 views)

Well if you write a dirty joke you have to be ready for people to be offended. Smut for smuts sake is not the sign ...   Fri Apr 8th, 2011 10:12 am

Critique my Play > one minute play (8 replies - 11470 views)

hmmm snarky. Well that is what was inferred right? ...   Thu Apr 7th, 2011 06:39 pm

Critique my Play > Missing Pieces (10 replies - 14446 views)

"Home" refers going to an afterlife. I write in the southeast and this is very common vernacular there but it will probably be changed for ...   Thu Mar 10th, 2011 11:17 am

Critique my Play > Missing Pieces (10 replies - 14446 views)

OK then. Obviously this one didn't resonate. I do have people read my work by the by some of them saw potential in it. I ...   Wed Mar 9th, 2011 10:19 pm

Critique my Play > Missing Pieces (10 replies - 14446 views)

I promised myself I wouldn't beg or please but...please please leave a comment. I mean 400 hundred views and no thoughts??? ...   Wed Mar 9th, 2011 06:15 pm

Critique my Play > Missing Pieces (10 replies - 14446 views)

So any thoughts? Comments? ...   Mon Mar 7th, 2011 06:13 pm

Critique my Play > Angels in America: Act Zero (3 replies - 8136 views)

I find the concept interesting. My point was simply this sometimes the subtle gets a message across quicker. ...   Thu Feb 24th, 2011 11:01 am

Critique my Play > Angels in America: Act Zero (3 replies - 8136 views)

I have to question copyright issues but that aside here are my thoughts. I felt like at times the dialgoue felt like it was trying ...   Wed Feb 23rd, 2011 03:34 pm

Critique my Play > ALIENS (6 replies - 10421 views)

I liked it my only criticism is the same as the post above. Is the lack of unique personality intentional? ...   Tue Feb 15th, 2011 03:48 pm

Critique my Play > After-Live (Act 1) (8 replies - 11696 views)

I really like the concept. However I agree with the previous post. On occasion it seems to be trying to hard to be funny. There ...   Tue Feb 15th, 2011 03:41 pm

Critique my Play > Missing Pieces (10 replies - 14446 views)

Hey everyone. I would really love and appreciate any feedback given. What works? What doesn't? My only request is please don't re-write lines. I know ...   Tue Feb 15th, 2011 03:11 pm

Critique my Play > Missing Pieces (10 replies - 14446 views)

Missing Pieces By Todd Ford ©2011   At Rise: Greg wears a black body suit. Greg gathers ...   Fri Feb 11th, 2011 06:13 pm

Critique my Play > live and breathe (2nd revision) (3 replies - 6326 views)

I don't neccesarily agree with eveything said in the previous post. I think the audience is supposed to empathize with the woman and her choice. ...   Wed Dec 15th, 2010 11:13 am

Critique my Play > The Last Living Polar Bear (3 replies - 7219 views)

I found it interesting but I was waiting for it to build to some revelation of meaning. ...   Tue Dec 14th, 2010 11:54 am

Critique my Play > live and breathe (2nd revision) (3 replies - 6326 views)

Wow very interesting and powerful. My only criticism would be that there is a lot of description in the stage directions that may not read. ...   Tue Dec 14th, 2010 11:16 am

Work-in-Progress > Another "Just Do It" piece (2 replies - 9448 views)

Dear Friends,         I am once again participating in a new works series called "Just Do It". This series assigns a theme and a time constraint ...   Mon Dec 13th, 2010 01:43 pm

Critique my Play > Lost and Found (3 replies - 5505 views)

Just FYI most people will be hesitant to post an e-mail address in a public forum. However and I hope to speak for most people ...   Tue Nov 23rd, 2010 04:15 pm

The Playwrights' Gym > Are you stuck? (5 replies - 18386 views)

While I agree the three/four act and hero's journey form are vital to theatre I feel that often time the aristotelian form these are based ...   Mon Nov 22nd, 2010 11:21 am

Work-in-Progress > Cycle (0 replies - 5733 views)

I've been working on this one act cycles and I'm struggling with it. If you could please give your opinion (without re-writing) I would appreciate ...   Wed Nov 17th, 2010 12:53 pm

Critique my Play > Sin story (5 replies - 10027 views)

I feel that it could be viewed that way because you are dealing with a moral question. Without proper character development giving the characters motivation ...   Tue Nov 16th, 2010 01:06 pm

Critique my Play > Ms. Maxwell And Mrs. Chen - part one (7 replies - 10769 views)

I thought it was a strong piece I really appreciate the slow reveal of the problem ...   Wed Oct 13th, 2010 03:44 pm

Critique my Play > Sin story (5 replies - 10027 views)

I liked it I just think it could be expanded to deepen the characters. I think without a little more character development it runs the ...   Wed Oct 13th, 2010 03:03 pm

Work-in-Progress > Money is the Root of All Evil (0 replies - 5893 views)

I am once again writing a piece for "Just Do It" at theatre Charlotte with th theme of "It's a Dog's Life". I decided to ...   Tue Aug 24th, 2010 03:48 pm

Critique my Play > Yggdrasil (7 replies - 9780 views)

I found it interesting. The only thing I wonder is how the clues will come together in the end. That's a good thing I suppose. ...   Thu Aug 12th, 2010 06:30 pm

Work-in-Progress > Of Marrital Bliss (4 replies - 11211 views)

the begining of yet another section   Money is the Root of All Evil By Todd Ford © 2010   At Rise: Katherine is at a computer doing the bills. Harold ...   Thu Aug 12th, 2010 02:28 pm

Work-in-Progress > An Angst Driven Teenage Social Awareness Play (5 replies - 14713 views)

Yes, I agree with you its very short. However as you said its difficult to lengthen without outplaying the joke. Maybe it will become part ...   Thu Aug 12th, 2010 01:02 pm

Critique my Play > THE FIVE O'CLOCK SHADOW or STUBBLE (18 replies - 22051 views)

RTurco,        I've been very hesitant to comment on peoples stuff lately (walking on eggshells a bit) but when I read yours I just had to. ...   Thu Aug 5th, 2010 07:25 pm

Work-in-Progress > Of Marrital Bliss (4 replies - 11211 views)

Thank you media res. In response I will post another one of the sectins I was working on entitle ""The Ring". This is actually based ...   Thu Aug 5th, 2010 07:12 pm

Work-in-Progress > Of Marrital Bliss (4 replies - 11211 views)

Having caused much disrutpion and dismay with opinions of people re-writing my piece I submit this with much trepidation. The piece which caused so much ...   Thu Aug 5th, 2010 01:01 pm

Work-in-Progress > Judas Play (3 replies - 9668 views)

I am struggling where to go with this piece and unfortunatley school is once again in session. So I believe it may have to be ...   Thu Aug 5th, 2010 12:55 pm

Critique my Play > the last time (28 replies - 30688 views)

Ahhh I've been gone for a while and see that I sparked a bit of a contreversey. As for being sensitive, irritated whatever consider me ...   Thu Jul 29th, 2010 07:39 pm

Critique my Play > the last time (28 replies - 30688 views)

Thank you. My frustration is that I was trying to say in a calm respectful way not to do that and someone not ivolved in ...   Thu Jun 3rd, 2010 07:09 pm

Critique my Play > the last time (28 replies - 30688 views)

actually I've been involved in theatre quite some time. I was trying to be kind but it is impolite to re-write people's plays. It also ...   Wed Jun 2nd, 2010 10:47 pm

Critique my Play > the last time (28 replies - 30688 views)

While I appreciate the help. I think it would be more helpful saying you could expand here or I think they could tal about ...   Wed Jun 2nd, 2010 08:41 pm

Critique my Play > the last time (28 replies - 30688 views)

Well "The Last Time" premiered at "Just Do It" in Charlotte to a rousing reception. After watching it myself and finnaly being freed of the ...   Wed Jun 2nd, 2010 12:15 pm

Work-in-Progress > Judas Play (3 replies - 9668 views)

(Jacob stands on a chair a noose around his neck Judas stands behind him)   Judas You did this to yourself.   Jacob No I didn’t the world id this to ...   Tue May 25th, 2010 12:53 pm

Work-in-Progress > An Angst Driven Teenage Social Awareness Play (5 replies - 14713 views)

Dearest Kind Reders,           I know you may not know but I am a strong believer in learning through knowledge. If you tarry here a while ...   Thu May 20th, 2010 12:55 pm

Work-in-Progress > Clarification on a Critique (16 replies - 27864 views)

I haven't read the work so I will keep my comments particularly brief. I write in a non-realistic vein primarily. While there are no set ...   Thu May 20th, 2010 12:53 pm

Critique my Play > the last time (28 replies - 30688 views)

Oh there are definitley going to be some changes. Its original inception was for something called "Just Do It" we have in Charlotte. Playwrights write ...   Thu May 6th, 2010 11:27 am

Critique my Play > the last time (28 replies - 30688 views)

although I appreciate the suggestions. (I agree with you the end is a bit mundane) I would appreciate it more if they were suggestions without ...   Thu May 6th, 2010 12:41 am

Work-in-Progress > An Angst Driven Teenage Social Awareness Play (5 replies - 14713 views)

Oh no its not done I needed to get Stephen Gregg of "This is a Test" fame's blessing before I posted the remainder (I borrowed ...   Sun May 2nd, 2010 11:10 pm

Critique my Play > the last time (28 replies - 30688 views)

Thanks for your guys help. As soon as I get through the first presentation I'm definitely re-writing and adding more details (for the first one ...   Wed Apr 28th, 2010 03:38 pm

Work-in-Progress > An Angst Driven Teenage Social Awareness Play (5 replies - 14713 views)

I've started writing this spoof. Please read and let me know what you think especially if you are familiar with plays like "Bang Bang You're ...   Mon Apr 26th, 2010 03:41 pm

Critique my Play > the last time (28 replies - 30688 views)

Yeah I was challenged to write a piece in 768 words because of this it did come across a bit sparse. I think when the ...   Sun Apr 25th, 2010 11:46 pm

Critique my Play > Manhood Monologue (6 replies - 8628 views)

Good use of symbolism and descriptive language however it felt very narrative to me. The thing about a monologue is you have to know who ...   Mon Apr 19th, 2010 03:10 pm

Critique my Play > the last time (28 replies - 30688 views)

The Last Time By Todd Ford © 2010 At Rise: Harold and Katherine are in bed. Harold watches T.V. Katherine reads a woman’s magazine. She glances at the ...   Mon Apr 19th, 2010 02:05 pm


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