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Work-in-Progress > Some Silliness About a fortune cookie (4 replies - 9510 views)

here it is the full version   “Fortune” By Todd Ford © 2010   Scene 1   At Rise: Bethany and Joe are sitting on a park bench a carton of lo mien ...   Mon Apr 12th, 2010 03:16 pm

Critique my Play > REALLY REALLY NEED HELP QUICKLY (10 replies - 11673 views)

I'm sorry thank you very much for your help ...   Sun Apr 11th, 2010 09:15 pm

Critique my Play > REALLY REALLY NEED HELP QUICKLY (10 replies - 11673 views)

Perhaps but its helpful to know where in a piece to start musing on. Oh well I see both yours and Patty's point well enough ...   Sun Apr 11th, 2010 09:08 pm

Critique my Play > REALLY REALLY NEED HELP QUICKLY (10 replies - 11673 views)

I re-read the play trying to keep an open mind to what has been said. I found a few instances where words could be paired ...   Sun Apr 11th, 2010 08:24 pm

Critique my Play > REALLY REALLY NEED HELP QUICKLY (10 replies - 11673 views)

First thank you for taking the time to critique my work. I understand that it is a pretty easy cut and dry piece. Given the ...   Sun Apr 11th, 2010 05:16 pm

Critique my Play > REALLY REALLY NEED HELP QUICKLY (10 replies - 11673 views)

The 768 restriction has been lifted so here is my third, and hopefully final, attempt. Let me know what you think. The ...   Sun Apr 11th, 2010 01:49 pm

Critique my Play > REALLY REALLY NEED HELP QUICKLY (10 replies - 11673 views)

and here is the second one let me know which (if any you prefer) The Last Time By Todd Ford © 2010 At Rise: Harold and Katherine are ...   Wed Apr 7th, 2010 03:21 pm

Work-in-Progress > Some Silliness About a fortune cookie (4 replies - 9510 views)

thank you all for your comments I have more but it is on my school computer and I'm on break. Look for more Monday. If ...   Wed Apr 7th, 2010 01:46 pm

Critique my Play > REALLY REALLY NEED HELP QUICKLY (10 replies - 11673 views)

I have been charged with creating a 768 wod play on the theme "The Last Time" I am going to be putting several scripts up ...   Tue Apr 6th, 2010 10:43 pm

Work-in-Progress > Just the Beginings (Rash) (1 reply - 6158 views)

any thoughts? Comments? Complaints about it being just one long bit? :-) ...   Wed Mar 31st, 2010 12:52 pm

Critique my Play > Whatever Leads You To Happiness (7 replies - 10226 views)

The foul language thing is actually a revelation I had from my publisher. I write a lot of one acts dealing with social issues. He ...   Tue Mar 30th, 2010 11:32 am

Critique my Play > Whatever Leads You To Happiness (7 replies - 10226 views)

I find the concept interesting but, and I may be off base here, I feel like we need more of a reason to be invested ...   Mon Mar 29th, 2010 02:28 pm

Work-in-Progress > Some Silliness About a fortune cookie (4 replies - 9510 views)

Here is scene one of a play “Fortune” By Todd Ford © 2010   At Rise: Bethany and Joe are sitting on a park bench a carton of lo mien ...   Fri Mar 26th, 2010 05:04 pm

Critique my Play > Whatever Leads You To Happiness (7 replies - 10226 views)

It was interesting but I'm not sure I got enough of a taste to really get a feel for the play. Is it established earlier ...   Mon Mar 22nd, 2010 03:16 pm

Critique my Play > THE SMELL A One Act Play (4 replies - 6995 views)

I really liked it I can't tell you the number of times I've had a smell I couldn't find. I would suggest that the seance ...   Mon Mar 22nd, 2010 03:12 pm

Work-in-Progress > Just the Beginings (Rash) (1 reply - 6158 views)

A more complete and better edited version of "Rash" Rash By Todd Ford © 2010   Scene 1   At Rise: A man, clearly a doctor, stands in a room with Mark. ...   Thu Mar 11th, 2010 02:34 pm

Critique my Play > Another scene (3 replies - 6714 views)

I like it. Interesting premise and set up. Left me wanting to know what happens afterward. The one suggestion I would have is to give ...   Thu Mar 11th, 2010 12:09 pm

Critique my Play > Letters (9 replies - 10993 views)

Media Res,          I agree with your in regards to detail. My specialty (and what I've had published) is shorter one act piece speciffically taylored for ...   Wed Mar 10th, 2010 11:57 am

Work-in-Progress > How long is a play? (28 replies - 96262 views)

Ed,     Sorry I feel as though I go on my soap box a bit. I just feel that sometimes we strive to make something that ...   Tue Mar 9th, 2010 11:55 am

Critique my Play > Letters (9 replies - 10993 views)

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Critique my Play > Letters (9 replies - 10993 views)

At the advice of others I greatly respect I am posting the entire first draft of the one act "Letters". I feel strongly in order ...   Fri Mar 5th, 2010 02:26 pm

Critique my Play > Letters (9 replies - 10993 views)

Well this one is a bit of experiment to me. It uses the letters to show the progression of the protagonist's (Thomas) life as well ...   Fri Mar 5th, 2010 02:06 pm

Work-in-Progress > How long is a play? (28 replies - 96262 views)

I think there is a bit of danger and accessing the lengths of piece. When the character's journey is over typically I find that its ...   Fri Mar 5th, 2010 11:54 am

Critique my Play > Letters (9 replies - 10993 views)

Right now it is a bit skeletal. I normaly write one acts and often struggle with fleshing out thing because of this but I could ...   Wed Mar 3rd, 2010 05:54 pm

Poet's Corner : Critique my Poem > The Snakes Will Eat Their Own Tales (4 replies - 6199 views)

I love it especially the title :-) ...   Wed Mar 3rd, 2010 03:09 pm

Critique my Play > A Very Small Expanse (4 replies - 7114 views)

Good piece very Beckeett. The only thing that bothered me is that the ending seemed to come a bit quickly. I would have liked to ...   Wed Mar 3rd, 2010 03:07 pm

Critique my Play > Letters (9 replies - 10993 views)

Letters By Todd Ford © 2010   At Rise: Two large areas of light. One on stage right and the other on stage left. In the stage left pool ...   Wed Mar 3rd, 2010 02:55 pm

Critique my Play > More sillyness. (4 replies - 7182 views)

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Critique my Play > More sillyness. (4 replies - 7182 views)

Very funny. I tihnk the humor works but I agree with the first poster that with the sitting thing a visual is enough. ...   Mon Feb 22nd, 2010 12:20 pm

Work-in-Progress > Funhouse (3 replies - 8337 views)

Thank you for your thoughts. The play has gone through several forms. I like the idea of reducing the interuptions. Interestingly enough the last line ...   Thu Feb 18th, 2010 03:35 pm

Critique my Play > motion of the carousel (2 replies - 5543 views)

Yeah I left out a couple words (that's what hapeens when I write during a study hall :-)) It should have read "I wasn't going ...   Thu Feb 18th, 2010 11:33 am

Critique my Play > motion of the carousel (2 replies - 5543 views)

Motion of the Carousel By Todd L. Ford copywright 2010   Jimmy I can’t help it Leslie whenever I look at it. It just makes me so sad.   Leslie Sad? Jimy it’s ...   Tue Feb 16th, 2010 03:21 pm

Work-in-Progress > Contemplating on a Children's Play (5 replies - 10360 views)

My production class takes a children's theater piece on tour every year. We try with little ones (k-3) to keep it at an hour. Older ...   Thu Feb 11th, 2010 02:26 pm

Work-in-Progress > Funhouse (3 replies - 8337 views)

Any opinions thoughts etc. I've tried posting on other's a little but I feel a little unqualified and out of my element.   Todd ...   Mon Feb 8th, 2010 02:46 pm

Work-in-Progress > 21 TODAY (7 replies - 12508 views)

I really liked. There is nothing like a play with a twist at the end. It had a great aha moment right at the end. ...   Tue Feb 2nd, 2010 12:36 pm

The Playwrights' Gym > Are you stuck? (5 replies - 18730 views)

This isn't exactly along the same lines but I found it to be a useful exercise in developing caharcters. Write a letter from the point ...   Fri Jan 29th, 2010 07:08 pm

Work-in-Progress > Funhouse (3 replies - 8337 views)

I am currently working on a one-act called "Funhouse" it is non-realistic and a little narrative but I have had this style work in earlier ...   Fri Jan 29th, 2010 04:24 pm

Work-in-Progress > Playwriting Stuff (33 replies - 56276 views)

I wanted to comment on not being linear. It wasn't until I gave up the idea of being linear that any of my plays were ...   Fri Jan 29th, 2010 03:33 pm

Please, introduce yourself ... > Hi all (2 replies - 5338 views)

Hi  I am a theatre arts teacher in Monroe, NC. I am also the author of three published one acts "And the Giants Fell", "Yellow" ...   Fri Jan 29th, 2010 03:22 pm


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