| Collaborators > Playwright/lyricist wanted for UNIQUE musical theatre project (9 replies - 1340 views)
MelodyMan,
Interesting project goals but the key to a musical is indeed the music. Music, as you know, evokes an emotional response; we are wired ... Tue Oct 16th, 2012 10:35 pm Critique my Play > The first scene of GO WITH IT (7 replies - 3168 views)
Ok, forgive me for being too blunt but . . . No. This really doesn't work for me. Maybe it's because I went to a ... Thu Jan 20th, 2011 03:13 am Critique my Play > The first scene of GO WITH IT (7 replies - 3168 views)
Happy to see more. To respond back:
As for the language: push the boundaries then cut back when you have to. Better to see the ... Wed Dec 15th, 2010 04:46 am Critique my Play > The first scene of GO WITH IT (7 replies - 3168 views)
I know it's been a while but I just joined in and thought I'd take a look around. You have good dialogue skills but have ... Wed Dec 15th, 2010 02:31 am Critique my Play > live and breathe (2nd revision) (3 replies - 883 views)
I don't know why you wrote this or what you want from me (as audience) to experience in watching this? What are you saying that's ... Tue Dec 14th, 2010 07:51 pm Please, introduce yourself ... > Hello from out here (2 replies - 1260 views)
Hi. Just announcing myself, my name is Michael. I've been not writing for a couple decades now but now that the kids are grown I'm ... Mon Dec 13th, 2010 06:27 am | 
